Monday, January 9, 2006

The void..

Burnt out ..
My mind,
my soul!

Remains now
the debris
of your memories
and my heart
with a tear!

No way
now…
it can heal..!

Nothing
will never fill
the void
you left behind!

Copyright (C) Archana Bora

1 comment:

david raphael israel said...

Archana,

if you intentionally wrote "Nothing will never" (rather than meaning "Nothing will ever), I'd say you've struck a nicely new phrasing & thought. If on other hand you were not doing this with intentional though, in that case it but shows how strong is the emotional grip behind the poem. So one as reader is impressed either in one way or the other, depending. But which is the correct reading I wonder? ;-)

best, d.i.